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Monday, April 27, 2009

The Fairytale

Another attempt at 55 fiction..

Princess is perched on a rock in the Royal Gardens.

Princess : (Bashfully) I.. I am in love with you.

Prince: _______________

Princess: Your unique traits, unblemished skin, throaty baritone...  Leaves me sleepless at nights!

Prince: _______________

Princess: Don't break my heart! Say you love me too!

Prince: *Croak*

The bullfrog then leaps into the murky puddle below.

13 comments:

  1. hahaaha... arey i love the way you take me somewhere else and then bam! LOL!

    lovely!... :)

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  2. LOL !!!!!!!!
    You made me smile :D
    lovely & soo sweet !

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  3. hey, that was so cool of me to make you smile. lol! :D
    :)
    xoxo! I am glad you liked it. :D and thnx for your million dollar smile :)

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  4. Hhahahahaa! This is by far the funniest 55 fiction I have read till date!

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  5. whoa! stop the prince! he's drowning!

    nice!

    but wasn't she supposed to kiss the froggy first? ;)

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  6. awesome!!!

    rofl.. the frog int turn into the prince but thankfully, the princess dint kiss the frog, or u never know, might she had become a she-frog too ;)

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  7. haha!!...appu-'princess' .....get out of "raja-rani-ki-duniya"....lolz

    me can't stop laughing...bechara prince :P

    bows ^O^ : to ur sense of humour.

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  8. @ Ash di :)
    :P ;) thnku!

    @ DP
    heyy.. thnx for visitng! ;) and mayb she would have.. dat's for the imagination.. :P

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  9. hehe lol, apurva, its not a fairytale, its a funnytale :P lol, u take care grl..

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  10. @ Richa
    Yea, it's pretty unknown, ;) mayb the girl would have turned into a frog and the frog a boy.. HAHA!

    @ Neeraj
    noooo..i like raja-rani duniya.. no hassles!
    thnku thnku :D thr's nuthn more satisfying dan hearing that u r a good comedian :)

    @ Kajal
    thnkuu :)

    @ Pulkit
    wohoo, means a lot coming from you. Thnx :)

    @ Sawan
    haha, yea, rite.. but then d charm would have been a bit lost :P if i named it fun tale.. ;)
    thnx!! take care too!

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