This is my attempt at fiction, and 55 fiction. Thanks for the inspiration Ms. R and Pink Orchid AND the Writer's Lounge :)
Shooting her a quizzing look, and pulling her into my arms, I whispered, "Aren't we having THE night stay, honey?"
"Yes, we are, but, my parents are back!"
Tensed, I thought "What if they knew?"
"Has Jessica arrived?" , asked her dad.
Releasing me, she answered in affirmation.
oooh... man..i was going somewhere else.. ;)
ReplyDeletewow.. i LOVE IT!!
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heyy.. welcome back..lol..hadn't seen u around much.. :P
ReplyDeletethnku! i thought kisi ko samajh hi nahi aaega! It was so discreet! LOL!
:) woho!! :) main inspiration!! jeeti raho kanya ..i am so proud of ya girl!! wonderful attempt. :D
ReplyDeleteareeee......no comments!! on this entry ;)
ReplyDeletebut warning accha tha!!! (not4 < 17 )...hehe....may be i should report your blog for "indecent-materials"..carry on appu
Thumbs up from me Appu !
ReplyDeleteKeep writing.. :)
Kya baat hai aaj all are on a roll :D Great one lady! See I called you a lady for writing stuff for people above 17 :P
ReplyDeletelol, interesting :) and i thought of something else :P thts ur first attempt? hopefully wud read more stories here :) good goin grl!
ReplyDeleteThat was hilarious! Aaj kal ki dunya. Kuch bhi ho sakta hai!
ReplyDelete@ Kajal
ReplyDeletehaha, yeah u were.. :P thnxx :D
@ neeraj
lol, try to report me..LOL! and thnx to u too..cuz u told me the meaning of 55 fiction ;) i was so irritated, samakjh hi nahi aa raha tha!
@ FMS
thnku so much :) xoxo
@ Ash
YAY! NO KIDDO! altho i love bein a kid, but i get frustrated..LOL! :) YAYIE!!
*hoombalala dance*
:P
@ Sawan
yea, my first attempt..surely will try to write more :)
@ Ms. R.
lol, "aaj kal ka kalyug" :P thnkuu!
i'm wsnt hre ;p lol nd ya rly cool stry luvd it!
ReplyDelete@ Miss Sunshine...
ReplyDeleteI have been banging my head with my java project :|
isilie i have been lazy and somewhat busy about writing and making my presence visible :p
hehe... write more na... im inspired by you n ashrita di now :D
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Superb! When the last line hits the reader..
ReplyDeleteIt makes you a good writer! ;)
:) thnx a ton for dropping by and appreciating :)
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