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Wednesday, May 20, 2009

I Miss You





I can't take it anymore.

Minutes pass by, uncountable times,
I'm craving for your company,
Seamless, I want the borders to be,
Seeing you soon, has become my only fantasy.


You aren't near..but I know you ain't far,
One of these days, I'm gonna reach you, wherever you are,
Until then, I lie down, counting the stars, and missing you, the brightest and the most far..

8 comments:

  1. You aren't near but i know you aint far...nice line

    Pleasant read.

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  2. this is so beautiful! simple wala beautiful!

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  3. A delightful read! And, this one is kisses the poetry section too! Keep writing!!!

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  4. @ Brosreview
    YAY! I thought isme bhi kuch betterment chahiye hoga. lol :D
    u rock! :) :)
    thankss!

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  5. Nice!Really pleasant and wonderful poem!

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