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Friday, May 15, 2009

You and I



You smile,

I laugh,

You pinch,

I shout,

You hug,

I blush,


You throw,

I catch,

You speak,

I hear,

You walk,

I run,

You smirk,

I giggle,

You fly,

I am your shadow.

You ate,

I saw,

You cried,

I comforted,

You hated,

I loved,

You cursed,

I shattered,

You disappeared,

I broke,

You walked,

I treaded the same worn out path.


You're going,

I'm crying,
You're shouting,

Not to me,

You're merry-making,

Not with me,

You're still smiling,

And I'm just trying.





11 comments:

  1. Wow!!it touched me in some way i reall liked it :)

    keep penning.

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  2. This was just too cute man :)
    i loved it :)

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  3. i loved it!!!
    So sweet!!..

    xoxox

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  4. @ FMS
    :) aww, thnku.. :) mayb the picture touched ur strings..it's really cute..haina?

    @ Nabs
    :) shukriya *bows* ;)

    @Gargi
    hehe, thnkuuuuu :)
    xoxooxoxox

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  5. first part was mushy :)

    and the later half was sad though beautiful :)

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  6. two opposing themes in the same post? but they are related i know.. happens..

    between.. it seems like its awarding time all over the blogsphere :)

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  7. very cute and beautiful :)

    lovely blog.

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  8. it started on such a happy note.. wished it end like tht too :(

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  9. @Richa
    haan, that's true.. cudnt find more verbs na ;)

    @ Shravan
    yep, that's wat i wanted to bring out.. "that it happens all the time" :(
    and thnku for reading :Dyea.. "award flu" haha!

    @Preetilata
    heyy, thnku so much :)

    @ Sawan
    that's the irony of life.. :( :)

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  10. I have read infinite posts titled the same as this one. But, yours stands out among a few because of the "style" you've expressed it in. Two to three words in each line conveying the mood-set.

    It is all right! Keep writing!!!

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  11. @ B
    thanks. It was really easy. and i liked the overall effect. hehe :)

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