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Saturday, June 6, 2009

Irreplacable


Into the blue you're dissapearing,
Remember me, will you ever?
Right, I know, you'll say 'yes',
Easy it isn't, you know.
Perhaps, this wasn't what you wanted,
Loads of trash it was,
Amicable, we had just become,
Couldn't you please stay?
Am I asking for too much?
But without you,
Life will be monotonous, unnerving,
Everything would cease to charm.


P.S.:
A Personal Note:

Irreplacable is what you are. You know who you are. I don't want to speculate, but, I am gonna miss you, and this is my small way.





14 comments:

  1. awww....this was just too cute and sweet...a perfect words to ur emotions...and the perfect poem at perfect time...i m sure the person this is intended for will love it as much :-)

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  2. Bless :)
    Lovely! wen i read the name it reminded me of the song by Beyonce :)

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  3. @ Nabs
    ur perfect. ;)
    muaah! thnks, i hope he/she does.

    @FMS
    yaa..dat song was playing in my mind.. :P

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  4. The emotions are conveyed very well to the person I am sure :)

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  5. thats a well written post.. know waht, i loved the emotions and the words are perfectly selected :) cheers

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  6. That was an amazing poem.

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  7. I hope you're not losing a friend hun. :) It hurts.

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  8. @Shravan
    thank you so much :D I am always at a loss of words..so this comes as a nice surprise.. :D

    @Nuchu
    *hugs* thanks!!


    @The perfect lady
    thankyou :D keep dropping by :D

    @Ms. R.
    naah, I wont lose this one. She/he is special, and we've already been through the frandshaapz test.. ;)

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  9. Nice! I like the tender feel in this piece. Keep it up!

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  10. Love is very irreplaceable .. and you spoke to it very well. I also like Beyonce song with the same title ...

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  11. :) thanks Amias. and i loove that song :D :P

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