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Friday, June 12, 2009

Lies and Cries


You used to call me your sweetheart,
I was your only obsession,
I was your princess,
Your goddess,
You my untilting saviour.

When you were worried,
You cried, You screamed,
When you were woe'd,
You'd stagger, You swore,
I still used to cradle you,
In the warmth of my heart.

Now that you have everything,
You are the master of the world,
I am reduced to a mere heap?
Am I nothing more than your usual dump?

Can't I see through your facade?
I used to dismiss it,
with a mere whim,
But now,
It's really unmasked.

What did you think?
I won’t know?
I am a scrubbed doormat?
To remove your untamed muck?

It's all over,
Even if
we want to rekindle it,
Because,
I am sick, tired of your lies,
Your unruly screamings and cries.



12 comments:

  1. Nice and powerful. Hope it is just fiction!

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  2. i go with satans darling :D powerful!

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  3. wow this was just WOW and powerful and heart trenching and somehow i cd relate to it....so i just hope its fiction !

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  4. This is honest and powerful! I could feel it! Keep writing!

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  5. wow.........
    that was powerful

    I will borrow ur poem for my blog with u of course.....

    so what say...

    wanna write a guest post for my blog... i will be honored....... :)

    ohh btw
    I just hope it's fictitious ...is it ???

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  6. @Everyone
    Oh yes, it's fiction! :D
    :)

    @Ash
    tee hehe :D
    thanks, :D

    @Shrawan
    that sounds nice. Powerful :D

    @Nabs
    u never relate to my happy poems :((
    galat baat! and thnx :)

    @ Brosreview
    thnx a lot :) :)

    @Daydreamer
    ofcourse, I can post one of my poems on ur blog, as a guest post. I will be honoured. That sounds so nice :) thanks :)

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  7. STRONG!

    it came as a splash of tsunami to me!
    SEE how strong?
    AND of course not to forget the word powerful!

    Keep striking!

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  8. hehehe, thanx for the powerful comment too.. :)
    thaaaankk yoouuu!

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  9. I come back..and i will let u know a date to post on my blog :)

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