
Yesterday, in my dreams,
Openly lit, the vast fields were,
Unendingly the blue skies streched.
Appalled, I was becoming numb, cuz,
Rusting, the scene looked decayed,
Everything seemed in place, still something was missing.
Mist and shadows lurked shamelessly,
You could even see the gloom hanging around.
Something was missing,
Understood what it was
Now, It struck me, so
Surprisingly, I couldn't take my eyes off.
How could I miss,
In a million years?
Newly lit the fields seemed,
Eased, I was relieved, cuz you were back, my sunshine.

Beautiful work lady :) You're growing with each attempt!
ReplyDeletethanks so much Ash..u knw how much this means to me :D thaank you!!!!
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ReplyDeleteBeautiful...:)
really bright post !! liked it :)
ReplyDeleteWoah nice template! Brill post! I enjoyed reading it!
ReplyDeleteGood job! Keep writing!!!
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@Prats
yayie..thnku :P
@rosh
i din like the temp very much :| :P
lol
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@B
:) thanks a lot. :)
Beautiful and bright!! Enjoyed your Acrostic...you should try these more often...Keep writing!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful sunshine.. Yep u shud keep tryin..
ReplyDelete@Dreamer
ReplyDeleteyayyyyy :d thaaanks!
@BB
reaaly? wow. thanks :D
Beautiful!A post filled with sunshine indeed!
ReplyDelete@Aysha
ReplyDelete:) how sweet of you :D thanks
miss sunshine...dis is really nice..very cute..n simple!! :)
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ReplyDeletethanks :) :)
This is a very sweet poem.
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