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Thursday, July 30, 2009

Back To Square One



Burnt
Again, into my
Catacomb.
Kneel I

Testing the presence of the
Omnipotent.

Slain,
Quiet,
Uncontrollable,
Am I
Retreating back to my
Endurance?

Onset of something
New? Or is it the lighted
Enigma I always knew?



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19 comments:

  1. mysterious galJuly 30, 2009 at 5:38 PM

    can i borrow a dictionary please :P

    girl ur going magnificent with poems
    this was truly amazing man
    loved it <3
    keep writing :D

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  2. AnonymousJuly 30, 2009 at 5:39 PM

    wow..

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  3. Miss SunshineJuly 30, 2009 at 5:54 PM

    oh please Nabs.. this was nothing compared to what u write.. I need to borrow a dictionary for every single word :P
    and thaanks!

    @Pinkzz
    thanks girl :D

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  4. RHYTHM AND RHYMEJuly 30, 2009 at 7:00 PM

    Keep them coming I love them,
    excellent to read as usual.


    Yvonne.

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  5. AmitJuly 30, 2009 at 7:16 PM

    nice attempt but i think u can write much better than this !

    Amit

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  6. Miss SunshineJuly 30, 2009 at 9:10 PM

    Thanks Yvonne :)


    Amit
    Can I? i'll try then : thanks!

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  7. ♪♪Happy Go Lucky♪♪July 30, 2009 at 9:53 PM

    That was so, professional-sounding!!like those things you read again and again and you understand it differently each time..

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  8. Shravan RaghunathJuly 30, 2009 at 10:48 PM

    think i must read it again and again :)

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  9. UnknownJuly 31, 2009 at 2:05 AM

    Every time...how do you manage this?

    WE must term...this unique style of poetry as Sunshine style. Lolz....right?

    Beautifully crafted...! Even I write poems, but no where near to you...so lucid, so simple, so endearing...

    keep writing more often...

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  10. ^_^ SENO ^_^July 31, 2009 at 11:14 AM

    Wow am reading your blog after looong time. i READ YOUR FIRST POEM and now this.

    Amazing transition. Now you are very good :)

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  11. Miss SunshineJuly 31, 2009 at 3:22 PM

    @Harini
    aww.. that was so sweet of you to say this :)
    thaanks.

    @shravan
    why not :D

    @Rajeev
    come on man..i am not even close to being a good writer..i have a long way to go :D but thanks for the flattery :)

    @Seno
    whoaaaa...some long time that means. :D and thanks :) hope to write as good as you someday, if not bttr :P

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  12. NainaJuly 31, 2009 at 3:39 PM

    woho! someone's has become a total expert when it comes to acrostic.. god bless ya oye!

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  13. Miss SunshineJuly 31, 2009 at 4:09 PM

    hahaha. thanks for all the buttering :P but m tryna lose weight ;) thaaanks!

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  14. AnonymousJuly 31, 2009 at 4:22 PM

    :)..wonderful..!

    Only by luck i cn manage Acrostic..! U are an expert ..:)

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  15. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)July 31, 2009 at 11:28 PM

    Oh Miss Sunshine, I love this one .. just perfect!

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  16. Miss SunshineAugust 2, 2009 at 11:37 AM

    thanks Vyshu :) but it's all thanks to Amias and her workshops.. :) u can do them too :D

    @Amias
    tttthaaaaaaaanks. You dont know what thaat means to me :)

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  17. SushmitaAugust 12, 2009 at 12:10 PM

    Wow..this one was unteresting...:)

    Three posts down and all that I'm reading is acro...but you are just too good at it :)

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  18. Miss SunshineAugust 12, 2009 at 4:50 PM

    :D thanks rose :D

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  19. The Blessed OneAugust 20, 2009 at 1:39 AM

    i realised it was a acro only after readin the last post...but still when i read it as a poem i found it just BRILLIANT! ur so damn good at acrostics and poetry!muaaaaaaaaah!xoxoxox!for my lil champ!

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