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Sunday, August 16, 2009

Ants In Your Pants

Amicably,
Not a
Trife
Suspiciously,

In went the
Noose.

Yes, laced with
Over sweetened,
Unbearably syrupy
Raspberry juice.

Pleased with the trick, I
Asked him if he
Noticed something fishy.
Terrified, he jumped and
Screamed, 'Ants in MY PANTS!'










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19 comments:

  1. Yellow TulipAugust 16, 2009 at 12:08 PM

    nice posts:):)...I loved your posts. will get round to reading more.:)...keep posting:)...

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  2. AnonymousAugust 16, 2009 at 12:15 PM

    Brilliant..!

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  3. AnonymousAugust 16, 2009 at 1:21 PM

    LOL :D Nicely written

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  4. Shravan RaghunathAugust 16, 2009 at 1:25 PM

    :) :) :) :D

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  5. AmitAugust 16, 2009 at 2:05 PM

    i like the title of the poem :D

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  6. Miss SunshineAugust 16, 2009 at 2:09 PM

    thanks guys..
    and @HR
    i liked it too..that's why i did it..haha!

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  7. GAugust 16, 2009 at 4:48 PM

    hehe..CUTEE!!.. =)
    absolutely LOVE reading ur poetry!!..even though I don't always leave comments... *embarrassed*..i still luv u!! =D

    take care!!
    xox

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  8. RHYTHM AND RHYMEAugust 16, 2009 at 6:33 PM

    You are certainly an expert in writing acrostics, I enjoy reading them.

    Yvonne.

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  9. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)August 16, 2009 at 8:51 PM

    This was so funny, I laugh because I know what happens when ants get on me .. I jump and scream!

    Thank you for being such a wonderful participants at AO and brightening up our lives with your poetry.

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  10. Miss SunshineAugust 16, 2009 at 9:36 PM

    it's alright gargi..no compulsion :D

    thanks Yvonne..it's become an addiction i suppose. :P

    aww Amias. :) i shud thank you for letting me do this. :)

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  11. The Write GirlAugust 17, 2009 at 4:13 AM

    This is a very creative acrostic and loads of fun...I enjoyed the read : )

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  12. OpaqueAugust 17, 2009 at 10:56 AM

    This was a fun read! Keep writing!!!

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  13. ♥ÐÅyÐяєÅмє®♥August 17, 2009 at 11:46 AM

    such a sweet read :P

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  14. Miss SunshineAugust 17, 2009 at 6:54 PM

    thank you everyone :D :)

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  15. Dont Patronise MeAugust 18, 2009 at 5:39 PM

    Really good stuff! Take a look at my few blogs, i'd love your opinion! Rachel

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  16. The Blessed OneAugust 20, 2009 at 1:15 AM

    really funny :P

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  17. PankhuriAugust 21, 2009 at 7:52 PM

    :) :) :) :) :)

    cheers
    Pankhuri

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  18. UnknownAugust 31, 2009 at 10:07 AM

    hahhaa....

    I had a very funny incident in my life...related to "ants in my pants".

    lolz...can't stop reminiscing and laughing...

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  19. ekta khetanSeptember 16, 2009 at 12:41 AM

    Brilliant, creative and artistic!

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