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Tuesday, August 11, 2009

First Date



Furtive glance
Incandescent blush
Repetitive
Stammering, tests
The night.


Danching with glee, he
Amazes me.
The peck on my cheek,
Estinguishes the fire of doubt!

Prompted @ Acrostic Only

13 comments:

  1. nice job, but somehow i feel like offending you say that he is misplaced.. but i liked it, very much..

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  2. extinguishing the fire of doubt.. my my..

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  3. @Vyshu and Yvonne
    thaaaaanks :) :) :D

    @Arshiya
    thanks so much :) i'l check out ur spot too :D

    @Shravan
    "but somehow i feel like offending you say that he is misplaced" wat does it mean?!
    LOL. I din get it. :O

    @Kajal
    oh come on. :P First dates do that..as if u dunno :P

    @Thanks daydreamer and rose :)

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  4. I love the last line of the poem the most ... moving doubts on a first date, not that was some date!

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  5. :D I had very little doubts.. :D and yep, they were all gone! Spoof! :D

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  6. Cutie Pie!but has deep meaning..especially the last line :) nice!

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  7. I am back to read this again, and I noticed two words are misspelled.

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