You smile,
I laugh,
You pinch,
I shout,
You hug,
I blush,
You throw,
I catch,
You speak,
I hear,
You walk,
I run,
You smirk,
I giggle,
You fly,
I am your shadow.
You ate,
I saw,
You cried,
I comforted,
You hated,
I loved,
You cursed,
I shattered,
You disappeared,
I broke,
You walked,
I treaded the same worn out path.
I saw,
You cried,
I comforted,
You hated,
I loved,
You cursed,
I shattered,
You disappeared,
I broke,
You walked,
I treaded the same worn out path.
You're going,
I'm crying,
You're shouting,
Not to me,
You're merry-making,
Not with me,
You're still smiling,
And I'm just trying.
Not to me,
You're merry-making,
Not with me,
You're still smiling,
And I'm just trying.
11 comments:
Wow!!it touched me in some way i reall liked it :)
keep penning.
This was just too cute man :)
i loved it :)
i loved it!!!
So sweet!!..
xoxox
@ FMS
:) aww, thnku.. :) mayb the picture touched ur strings..it's really cute..haina?
@ Nabs
:) shukriya *bows* ;)
@Gargi
hehe, thnkuuuuu :)
xoxooxoxox
first part was mushy :)
and the later half was sad though beautiful :)
two opposing themes in the same post? but they are related i know.. happens..
between.. it seems like its awarding time all over the blogsphere :)
very cute and beautiful :)
lovely blog.
it started on such a happy note.. wished it end like tht too :(
@Richa
haan, that's true.. cudnt find more verbs na ;)
@ Shravan
yep, that's wat i wanted to bring out.. "that it happens all the time" :(
and thnku for reading :Dyea.. "award flu" haha!
@Preetilata
heyy, thnku so much :)
@ Sawan
that's the irony of life.. :( :)
I have read infinite posts titled the same as this one. But, yours stands out among a few because of the "style" you've expressed it in. Two to three words in each line conveying the mood-set.
It is all right! Keep writing!!!
@ B
thanks. It was really easy. and i liked the overall effect. hehe :)
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