Amicably,
Not a
Trife
Suspiciously,
In went the
Noose.
Yes, laced with
Over sweetened,
Unbearably syrupy
Raspberry juice.
Pleased with the trick, I
Asked him if he
Noticed something fishy.
Terrified, he jumped and
Screamed, 'Ants in MY PANTS!'
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
19 comments:
nice posts:):)...I loved your posts. will get round to reading more.:)...keep posting:)...
Brilliant..!
LOL :D Nicely written
:) :) :) :D
i like the title of the poem :D
thanks guys..
and @HR
i liked it too..that's why i did it..haha!
hehe..CUTEE!!.. =)
absolutely LOVE reading ur poetry!!..even though I don't always leave comments... *embarrassed*..i still luv u!! =D
take care!!
xox
You are certainly an expert in writing acrostics, I enjoy reading them.
Yvonne.
This was so funny, I laugh because I know what happens when ants get on me .. I jump and scream!
Thank you for being such a wonderful participants at AO and brightening up our lives with your poetry.
it's alright gargi..no compulsion :D
thanks Yvonne..it's become an addiction i suppose. :P
aww Amias. :) i shud thank you for letting me do this. :)
This is a very creative acrostic and loads of fun...I enjoyed the read : )
This was a fun read! Keep writing!!!
such a sweet read :P
thank you everyone :D :)
Really good stuff! Take a look at my few blogs, i'd love your opinion! Rachel
really funny :P
:) :) :) :) :)
cheers
Pankhuri
hahhaa....
I had a very funny incident in my life...related to "ants in my pants".
lolz...can't stop reminiscing and laughing...
Brilliant, creative and artistic!
Post a Comment