You used to call me your sweetheart,
I was your only obsession,
I was your princess,
Your goddess,
You my untilting saviour.
When you were worried,
You cried, You screamed,
When you were woe'd,
You'd stagger, You swore,
I still used to cradle you,
In the warmth of my heart.
Now that you have everything,
You are the master of the world,
I am reduced to a mere heap?
Am I nothing more than your usual dump?
Can't I see through your facade?
I used to dismiss it,
with a mere whim,
But now,
It's really unmasked.
What did you think?
I won’t know?
I am a scrubbed doormat?
To remove your untamed muck?
It's all over,
Even if we want to rekindle it,
Because,
I am sick, tired of your lies,
Your unruly screamings and cries.
I was your only obsession,
I was your princess,
Your goddess,
You my untilting saviour.
When you were worried,
You cried, You screamed,
When you were woe'd,
You'd stagger, You swore,
I still used to cradle you,
In the warmth of my heart.
Now that you have everything,
You are the master of the world,
I am reduced to a mere heap?
Am I nothing more than your usual dump?
Can't I see through your facade?
I used to dismiss it,
with a mere whim,
But now,
It's really unmasked.
What did you think?
I won’t know?
I am a scrubbed doormat?
To remove your untamed muck?
It's all over,
Even if we want to rekindle it,
Because,
I am sick, tired of your lies,
Your unruly screamings and cries.
12 comments:
Nice and powerful. Hope it is just fiction!
i go with satans darling :D powerful!
wow this was just WOW and powerful and heart trenching and somehow i cd relate to it....so i just hope its fiction !
This is honest and powerful! I could feel it! Keep writing!
wow.........
that was powerful
I will borrow ur poem for my blog with u of course.....
so what say...
wanna write a guest post for my blog... i will be honored....... :)
ohh btw
I just hope it's fictitious ...is it ???
@Everyone
Oh yes, it's fiction! :D
:)
@Ash
tee hehe :D
thanks, :D
@Shrawan
that sounds nice. Powerful :D
@Nabs
u never relate to my happy poems :((
galat baat! and thnx :)
@ Brosreview
thnx a lot :) :)
@Daydreamer
ofcourse, I can post one of my poems on ur blog, as a guest post. I will be honoured. That sounds so nice :) thanks :)
so touching ...nice one.
@Shiva
thanks :)
STRONG!
it came as a splash of tsunami to me!
SEE how strong?
AND of course not to forget the word powerful!
Keep striking!
hehehe, thanx for the powerful comment too.. :)
thaaaankk yoouuu!
I come back..and i will let u know a date to post on my blog :)
sure day dreamer :D
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