Thursday, June 18, 2009
You Are My Sunshine
Yesterday, in my dreams,
Openly lit, the vast fields were,
Unendingly the blue skies streched.
Appalled, I was becoming numb, cuz,
Rusting, the scene looked decayed,
Everything seemed in place, still something was missing.
Mist and shadows lurked shamelessly,
You could even see the gloom hanging around.
Something was missing,
Understood what it was
Now, It struck me, so
Surprisingly, I couldn't take my eyes off.
How could I miss,
In a million years?
Newly lit the fields seemed,
Eased, I was relieved, cuz you were back, my sunshine.
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Beautiful work lady :) You're growing with each attempt!
thanks so much Ash..u knw how much this means to me :D thaank you!!!!
I'm making your night by commentin honestly:P
Beautiful...:)
really bright post !! liked it :)
Woah nice template! Brill post! I enjoyed reading it!
Good job! Keep writing!!!
@Rose
:) eeeeee..thanks :D
@Prats
yayie..thnku :P
@rosh
i din like the temp very much :| :P
lol
thanks :D
x
@B
:) thanks a lot. :)
Beautiful and bright!! Enjoyed your Acrostic...you should try these more often...Keep writing!!
Beautiful sunshine.. Yep u shud keep tryin..
@Dreamer
yayyyyy :d thaaanks!
@BB
reaaly? wow. thanks :D
Beautiful!A post filled with sunshine indeed!
@Aysha
:) how sweet of you :D thanks
miss sunshine...dis is really nice..very cute..n simple!! :)
@Anshu
thanks :) :)
This is a very sweet poem.
thanks :)
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