Friday, February 26, 2010

Phoenix



Part away, floating clouds

Here I come, again

O'er the mystic ashes

Erasing the looming despondency

No, I don't promise

I shall wander again


X'mas, I'll be back..


Prompted @ Acrostic Only

8 comments:

The Blessed One said...

:) happy poem

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Lovely poem, a pleasure to read.

Yvonne.,

Miss Sunshine said...

thanks a lot :D

roshwrites said...

beautiful layout, I love it :)
cooool acro :)
And yes I remember you :D

vidya said...

Loved the different take you attempted in this acro..well done

The Write Girl said...

Wonderful acrostic and that picture is stunning..very inviting.

Amias said...

A very interesting take on the prompt. glad to see you are still writing acrostics.

Miss Sunshine said...

@rosh
that's one of my test layouts..as soon as my exams get over..I promise to be a bit more active.. :) thank you so much.

@Vidya
thankyou so much :)

@The Write Girl
I loved the picture too :D thank you :))



@Amias
Don't make me feel guilty! :( and thanks.. I promise to be back more often! :)