Sunday, August 16, 2009

Ants In Your Pants

Amicably,
Not a
Trife
Suspiciously,

In went the
Noose.

Yes, laced with
Over sweetened,
Unbearably syrupy
Raspberry juice.

Pleased with the trick, I
Asked him if he
Noticed something fishy.
Terrified, he jumped and
Screamed, 'Ants in MY PANTS!'










20 comments:

Yellow Tulip said...

nice posts:):)...I loved your posts. will get round to reading more.:)...keep posting:)...

Vyshu said...

Brilliant..!

~PrIncEsS nUcHu~ said...

LOL :D Nicely written

Shravan | ശ്രവണ്‍ said...

:) :) :) :D

Hopeless Romantic said...

i like the title of the poem :D

Miss Sunshine said...

thanks guys..
and @HR
i liked it too..that's why i did it..haha!

gargi said...

hehe..CUTEE!!.. =)
absolutely LOVE reading ur poetry!!..even though I don't always leave comments... *embarrassed*..i still luv u!! =D

take care!!
xox

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

You are certainly an expert in writing acrostics, I enjoy reading them.

Yvonne.

Amias said...

This was so funny, I laugh because I know what happens when ants get on me .. I jump and scream!

Thank you for being such a wonderful participants at AO and brightening up our lives with your poetry.

Miss Sunshine said...

it's alright gargi..no compulsion :D

thanks Yvonne..it's become an addiction i suppose. :P

aww Amias. :) i shud thank you for letting me do this. :)

The Write Girl said...

This is a very creative acrostic and loads of fun...I enjoyed the read : )

Brosreview said...

This was a fun read! Keep writing!!!

♥ÐÅyÐяєÅмє®♥ said...

such a sweet read :P

Miss Sunshine said...

thank you everyone :D :)

DontPatroniseMe said...

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The Blessed One said...

really funny :P

..pAnKHuRi.. said...

:) :) :) :) :)

cheers
Pankhuri

Rajeev R said...

hahhaa....

I had a very funny incident in my life...related to "ants in my pants".

lolz...can't stop reminiscing and laughing...

numerounity said...

Brilliant, creative and artistic!

Miss Sunshine said...

thanks :)