Tuesday, August 11, 2009

First Date



Furtive glance
Incandescent blush
Repetitive
Stammering, tests
The night.


Danching with glee, he
Amazes me.
The peck on my cheek,
Estinguishes the fire of doubt!

Prompted @ Acrostic Only

15 comments:

Vyshu said...

Romantic :)..

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

Very romantic


Yvonne.

अर्शिया अली said...

Nice Blog. Congrats.
{ Treasurer-T & S }

Shravan | ശ്രവണ്‍ said...

nice job, but somehow i feel like offending you say that he is misplaced.. but i liked it, very much..

Rane (The Orchid with All Shades Pink) said...

extinguishing the fire of doubt.. my my..

♥ÐÅyÐяєÅмє®♥ said...

shwweet

Rose said...

very cute and romantic:)

Miss Sunshine said...

@Vyshu and Yvonne
thaaaaanks :) :) :D

@Arshiya
thanks so much :) i'l check out ur spot too :D

@Shravan
"but somehow i feel like offending you say that he is misplaced" wat does it mean?!
LOL. I din get it. :O

@Kajal
oh come on. :P First dates do that..as if u dunno :P

@Thanks daydreamer and rose :)

~PrIncEsS nUcHu~ said...

Awww.. cute!!

Miss Sunshine said...

thank you :)

Amias said...

I love the last line of the poem the most ... moving doubts on a first date, not that was some date!

Miss Sunshine said...

:D I had very little doubts.. :D and yep, they were all gone! Spoof! :D

The Blessed One said...

Cutie Pie!but has deep meaning..especially the last line :) nice!

Amias said...

I am back to read this again, and I noticed two words are misspelled.

aqua gurl said...

nice!!!