Tuesday, August 11, 2009

First Date



Furtive glance
Incandescent blush
Repetitive
Stammering, tests
The night.


Danching with glee, he
Amazes me.
The peck on my cheek,
Estinguishes the fire of doubt!

Prompted @ Acrostic Only

13 comments:

Anonymous said...

Romantic :)..

RHYTHM AND RHYME said...

Very romantic


Yvonne.

Shravan RN said...

nice job, but somehow i feel like offending you say that he is misplaced.. but i liked it, very much..

Naina said...

extinguishing the fire of doubt.. my my..

♥ÐÅyÐяєÅмє®♥ said...

shwweet

Sushmita said...

very cute and romantic:)

Miss Sunshine said...

@Vyshu and Yvonne
thaaaaanks :) :) :D

@Arshiya
thanks so much :) i'l check out ur spot too :D

@Shravan
"but somehow i feel like offending you say that he is misplaced" wat does it mean?!
LOL. I din get it. :O

@Kajal
oh come on. :P First dates do that..as if u dunno :P

@Thanks daydreamer and rose :)

Anonymous said...

Awww.. cute!!

Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...

I love the last line of the poem the most ... moving doubts on a first date, not that was some date!

Miss Sunshine said...

:D I had very little doubts.. :D and yep, they were all gone! Spoof! :D

The Blessed One said...

Cutie Pie!but has deep meaning..especially the last line :) nice!

Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...

I am back to read this again, and I noticed two words are misspelled.

aqua gurl said...

nice!!!