Tuesday, April 14, 2009

Just The Tiny Ray..

Tormenting rains,
Gusts of winds,
Uprooted soil,
STILL, the tree survives,
You ask me, but how?

Depleting oxygen,
Damp wick,
And, the last matchstick,
STILL, the candle burns,
You ask me, but how?

8 months pregnant,
Premature baby,
Painful labour hours,
STILL, the mother breathes,
You ask me, but how?

A phone call a day,
The long delayed meeting,
The never ending anticipation,
Of feeling each other's arms, again,
STILL, the lovers love,
You ask me, but how?

3 Years of rigorous study,
Just for one exam,
It turns out to be a bit rough,
STILL , the boy makes it,
You ask me, but how?

Ruthless deforestation,
Untamed pollution,
Unauthorised exploitation,
STILL, the earth blooms,
You ask me, but how?

Crazy Tsunamis,
Destroying Cyclones,
Devastating Floods,
STILL the rainbow spreads it's colours,
You ask me, but how?

I smile,
And ask you to look within,
Within yourself,
Within your pure heart,
And ask you again,
"Do you see the Tiny Ray,
Struggling to shine, 
Amidst all the hatred and negative thoughts?"
That is the answer to your question..
The Tiny Ray of HOPE is what makes the world go round!

That's my message to everyone, that never ever choose Fear over Hope. Cuz once you let fear overpower, never can you win against it. Let the Tiny Ray spread it's wings, and fly, and grow, like the rainbow and provide hope to all those who need it, in different forms and colours.


Anonymous said...

very well put up appu!! there is some thing special and beautiful in us which we cannot see. Similarly sometimes we over look the same beauty in others, which makes us hate that person!!
Well done...

CrAzY fReAk! said...

Thnku so much! and u summarised my poem so well! :) That was so thoughtful and so damn true! :)

Ms.R. said...

WOW Love it! Amazing! :D Very touching

CrAzY fReAk! said...

thnkuu <3 :)

IcE MaiDeN said...

wowww.... u knw its this ray fo hope tht makes me smile today!! :)

lovely lovely poem.. !!!


Anonymous said...

yuo made the whole environment (vaataavaran) very positive.. :) god bless you!

अविनाश said...

beautifully composed

CrAzY fReAk! said...

@ Annie
i am so glad i am the reason for ur beautiful smile today! :))

@ kajal
thnx :) i am honoured! :P

@ Avinash
thnx so much :D :D

Anushka said...

bahut accha tha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

neeraj_only said...

oyeee freak!!!.....so positive stuff from you. So big topic this is...movies, books, poems, "bhasan"/lectures (from teachers, friends, moms, dads..long list) on this.

my fav movie on this is ..."iqbal" ...and i just love the song "assayein..from the same movie.

ps: puchi means petite(lilliputian.....lol) in japanese. right?...any different meaning in this case kya? :P aise let the person "you-know-who" use it :P

CrAzY fReAk! said...

@ Annu
thnx sis :)

@ Neeraj
thnx :)) yea, i love that song too! it is so so energetic!
and does it mean petite in japanese? wohoo! yes, it's pretty different meaning..which is personal ! for me , as in.. :P
I'l tell you-know-who this meaning too!

mysterious gal said...

wow girl...u r indeed turning into the most amazing poetess i know and u used to say u cant write poetry :P.....and on top of it all u made everything arnd so hopeful and beautiful with such a poem....God Blesses u always :D
Love ya

CrAzY fReAk! said...

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! thankuuuu! coming from YOU, it's the best thing that happened to me today! :))
I wrote it in the spur of the moment.. Somebody close to me was pretty lost, and had lost all the hope..dat's y i wrote it.. :P :)

Anonymous said...

awesome n easy message dear !!

CrAzY fReAk! said...

thnku :)

Satans Darling™ said...

I cannot believe this is composed by the girl who thought she could never write a single poem! Can you?

Lovely work. Reminds me of Shawshank Redemption :) Do watch that movie if you haven't!

Miss Sunshine said...

yaa.. i have to watch it.. my friends also keep tellin me to.. :P
LOL! it justs pops into my mind :P :) and I write.. hehe, thnkuu :)


i love this!!!!

YOU go gurl!!!

m proud of you!

Miss Sunshine said...

eeee, welcome :)

Brosreview said...

This is mighty strong! I love the adequate intensity this piece carries. Not so much that it is hard to digest, not so light that the message is unclear. It is just right!

Keep writing! I reckon this is one of your best pieces!

Miss Sunshine said...

omg! Thanks! :D Thanks so much! :) :)
you made my day. :D :D