Wednesday, May 20, 2009

I Miss You

I can't take it anymore.

Minutes pass by, uncountable times,
I'm craving for your company,
Seamless, I want the borders to be,
Seeing you soon, has become my only fantasy.

You aren't near..but I know you ain't far,
One of these days, I'm gonna reach you, wherever you are,
Until then, I lie down, counting the stars, and missing you, the brightest and the most far..


fms1988 said...

You aren't near but i know you aint far...nice line

Pleasant read.

Miss Sunshine said...

thnx a ton :)


this is so beautiful! simple wala beautiful!

Miss Sunshine said...

thank you *bows*

Brosreview said...

A delightful read! And, this one is kisses the poetry section too! Keep writing!!!

Miss Sunshine said...

@ Brosreview
YAY! I thought isme bhi kuch betterment chahiye hoga. lol :D
u rock! :) :)

The Blessed One said...

Nice!Really pleasant and wonderful poem!

Miss Sunshine said...

thanku :) :D :*