Tuesday, May 26, 2009

When You Look at Me




When you look at me,
That's all is what is enough,
To let me know,
What's love in the true sense,

The surge of affection,
In your deep brown eyes,
Carries me away,
The warmth in your words,
Makes me more malleable than a candle,


Cuz when you look at me,
That's all what it takes,
To make me feel, On top of this world!



9 comments:

яノςんム said...

its beautiful.. :)

Miss Sunshine said...

thank you :)

The Pink Orchid said...

you rock girl!

Princess Caspian said...

sweet!

Shravan | ശ്രവണ്‍ said...

thats way too simple and too good :) cheersss

sawan said...

beautiful!! cud relate to it Apurva :) u brought a smile on my face :) good day to ya.

Miss Sunshine said...

@ Princess Caspian
you're the third princess who's visitng my blog! Royal! :P :) thank you!

@Shravan
the secret is that i cant write complex stuff :P

@Sawan
good day to you too :) i am glad you could relate to it. thanks :)

Brosreview said...

This is quite uncomplicated and smooth. Although this is quite clichéd, I liked the second stanza a lot. The theme might be (as I mentioned) common, the expression makes it tad different from the rest.

You could polish this in a few months' time. Good luck!

Miss Sunshine said...

@ Brosreview

I really appreciate you. Thanks a lot for your honesty. You'll make me learn! YAY! thanks :D