When you look at me,
That's all is what is enough,
To let me know,
What's love in the true sense,
The surge of affection,
In your deep brown eyes,
Carries me away,
The warmth in your words,
Makes me more malleable than a candle,
Cuz when you look at me,
That's all what it takes,
To make me feel, On top of this world!
9 comments:
its beautiful.. :)
thank you :)
you rock girl!
sweet!
thats way too simple and too good :) cheersss
beautiful!! cud relate to it Apurva :) u brought a smile on my face :) good day to ya.
@ Princess Caspian
you're the third princess who's visitng my blog! Royal! :P :) thank you!
@Shravan
the secret is that i cant write complex stuff :P
@Sawan
good day to you too :) i am glad you could relate to it. thanks :)
This is quite uncomplicated and smooth. Although this is quite clichéd, I liked the second stanza a lot. The theme might be (as I mentioned) common, the expression makes it tad different from the rest.
You could polish this in a few months' time. Good luck!
@ Brosreview
I really appreciate you. Thanks a lot for your honesty. You'll make me learn! YAY! thanks :D
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