Burnt
Again, into my
Catacomb.
Kneel I
Testing the presence of the
Omnipotent.
Slain,
Quiet,
Uncontrollable,
Am I
Retreating back to my
Endurance?
Onset of something
New? Or is it the lighted
Enigma I always knew?
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Chronicles of my feet first jumps into crazy situations.
19 comments:
can i borrow a dictionary please :P
girl ur going magnificent with poems
this was truly amazing man
loved it <3
keep writing :D
wow..
oh please Nabs.. this was nothing compared to what u write.. I need to borrow a dictionary for every single word :P
and thaanks!
@Pinkzz
thanks girl :D
Keep them coming I love them,
excellent to read as usual.
Yvonne.
nice attempt but i think u can write much better than this !
Amit
Thanks Yvonne :)
Amit
Can I? i'll try then : thanks!
That was so, professional-sounding!!like those things you read again and again and you understand it differently each time..
think i must read it again and again :)
Every time...how do you manage this?
WE must term...this unique style of poetry as Sunshine style. Lolz....right?
Beautifully crafted...! Even I write poems, but no where near to you...so lucid, so simple, so endearing...
keep writing more often...
Wow am reading your blog after looong time. i READ YOUR FIRST POEM and now this.
Amazing transition. Now you are very good :)
@Harini
aww.. that was so sweet of you to say this :)
thaanks.
@shravan
why not :D
@Rajeev
come on man..i am not even close to being a good writer..i have a long way to go :D but thanks for the flattery :)
@Seno
whoaaaa...some long time that means. :D and thanks :) hope to write as good as you someday, if not bttr :P
woho! someone's has become a total expert when it comes to acrostic.. god bless ya oye!
hahaha. thanks for all the buttering :P but m tryna lose weight ;) thaaanks!
:)..wonderful..!
Only by luck i cn manage Acrostic..! U are an expert ..:)
Oh Miss Sunshine, I love this one .. just perfect!
thanks Vyshu :) but it's all thanks to Amias and her workshops.. :) u can do them too :D
@Amias
tttthaaaaaaaanks. You dont know what thaat means to me :)
Wow..this one was unteresting...:)
Three posts down and all that I'm reading is acro...but you are just too good at it :)
:D thanks rose :D
i realised it was a acro only after readin the last post...but still when i read it as a poem i found it just BRILLIANT! ur so damn good at acrostics and poetry!muaaaaaaaaah!xoxoxox!for my lil champ!
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