Friday, June 5, 2009

If You Were a Song

For, The Blessed One, and dedicated to all of those, who are in love.


If you were a song,
You'd be the theme of my life,
You'd be the story of my happiness,
The chorus would have defined me,
The rhyme, our compatibility.

The melody would entrance me,
Hypnotise me, Enchant me,
My heart would thump,
In accordance with the beats.

If you'd be the sad saga,
I'd be the tragic queen,
If you'd be happy and gala,
I would be the
Sunshine.

The ending, would never arrive,
The tears would, never come,
Because if you were the song,
It would go on forever.


P.S. If you were a song, I'd be your melody.
:)


13 comments:

Satans Darling™ said...

How do you write such sweet poems?

mysterious gal said...

wah wah kya baat keh diya....this was just so cute and sweet and romantic ...loved it :) and ya reply to ash so that i get the ideas too :P

Miss Sunshine said...

@ Ash
hehehe, a small vocabulary helps. :P

@ Nabs
;)
thankyou! heheh, i dunno. I am so frustrated that i cant write hot-shot stuff like u guys.. :P and u ask me how to write dumb things.. ;)

PULKIT said...

that was written beautifully...
:)

loved it to the core of my heart dear!
tc god bls! keep writing!
:)

Miss Sunshine said...

Aww Pulkit, thank you so much! :)
I am glad :D thank you!!

Jaideep said...

as said above, a beautifully written poem!!
very romantic, i must say!!!

GO ON, APPU!!

Shravan | ശ്രവണ്‍ said...

that is waht i call romantic.. :) loved it loved it and loved it !

Miss Sunshine said...

@Jades
OMG! what a surprise..I am really touched. and thank you, for helping me :))

@Shravan
oh gosh, thank you so much for "loving" my piem..what more can I ask for??

Brosreview said...

The idea and theme is quite stale (pardon me). But, it is sweet as a dedication. Keep writing!

Miss Sunshine said...

@ Brosreview
:D yes, it is, I know. Thanks for the honesty :P
thanks! :D

The Blessed One said...

Dats one awesome poem rittn by one awesome person!keep it up!you rock!

Miss Sunshine said...

@TBO
hehehe, ur the awesomest. :P

The Blessed One said...

@ brosreview pardon me but my opinion is that the theme rocks and so does da poem to each his own