Friday, June 12, 2009

Lies and Cries

You used to call me your sweetheart,
I was your only obsession,
I was your princess,
Your goddess,
You my untilting saviour.

When you were worried,
You cried, You screamed,
When you were woe'd,
You'd stagger, You swore,
I still used to cradle you,
In the warmth of my heart.

Now that you have everything,
You are the master of the world,
I am reduced to a mere heap?
Am I nothing more than your usual dump?

Can't I see through your facade?
I used to dismiss it,
with a mere whim,
But now,
It's really unmasked.

What did you think?
I won’t know?
I am a scrubbed doormat?
To remove your untamed muck?

It's all over,
Even if
we want to rekindle it,
I am sick, tired of your lies,
Your unruly screamings and cries.


Satans Darling™ said...

Nice and powerful. Hope it is just fiction!

Shravan | ശ്രവണ്‍ said...

i go with satans darling :D powerful!

mysterious gal said...

wow this was just WOW and powerful and heart trenching and somehow i cd relate to i just hope its fiction !

Brosreview said...

This is honest and powerful! I could feel it! Keep writing!

♥ÐÅyÐяєÅмє®♥ said...

that was powerful

I will borrow ur poem for my blog with u of course.....

so what say...

wanna write a guest post for my blog... i will be honored....... :)

ohh btw
I just hope it's fictitious it ???

Miss Sunshine said...

Oh yes, it's fiction! :D

tee hehe :D
thanks, :D

that sounds nice. Powerful :D

u never relate to my happy poems :((
galat baat! and thnx :)

@ Brosreview
thnx a lot :) :)

ofcourse, I can post one of my poems on ur blog, as a guest post. I will be honoured. That sounds so nice :) thanks :)

shiva... said...

so touching ...nice one.

Miss Sunshine said...

thanks :)

Princess Caspian said...


it came as a splash of tsunami to me!
SEE how strong?
AND of course not to forget the word powerful!

Keep striking!

Miss Sunshine said...

hehehe, thanx for the powerful comment too.. :)
thaaaankk yoouuu!

♥ÐÅyÐяєÅмє®♥ said...

I come back..and i will let u know a date to post on my blog :)

Miss Sunshine said...

sure day dreamer :D