Into the blue you're dissapearing,
Remember me, will you ever?
Right, I know, you'll say 'yes',
Easy it isn't, you know.
Perhaps, this wasn't what you wanted,
Loads of trash it was,
Amicable, we had just become,
Couldn't you please stay?
Am I asking for too much?
But without you,
Life will be monotonous, unnerving,
Everything would cease to charm.
P.S.:
A Personal Note:
Irreplacable is what you are. You know who you are. I don't want to speculate, but, I am gonna miss you, and this is my small way.
Remember me, will you ever?
Right, I know, you'll say 'yes',
Easy it isn't, you know.
Perhaps, this wasn't what you wanted,
Loads of trash it was,
Amicable, we had just become,
Couldn't you please stay?
Am I asking for too much?
But without you,
Life will be monotonous, unnerving,
Everything would cease to charm.
P.S.:
A Personal Note:
Irreplacable is what you are. You know who you are. I don't want to speculate, but, I am gonna miss you, and this is my small way.
14 comments:
awww....this was just too cute and sweet...a perfect words to ur emotions...and the perfect poem at perfect time...i m sure the person this is intended for will love it as much :-)
Bless :)
Lovely! wen i read the name it reminded me of the song by Beyonce :)
@ Nabs
ur perfect. ;)
muaah! thnks, i hope he/she does.
@FMS
yaa..dat song was playing in my mind.. :P
The emotions are conveyed very well to the person I am sure :)
I hope so, Ash :)
thats a well written post.. know waht, i loved the emotions and the words are perfectly selected :) cheers
*Claps*!
That was an amazing poem.
I hope you're not losing a friend hun. :) It hurts.
@Shravan
thank you so much :D I am always at a loss of words..so this comes as a nice surprise.. :D
@Nuchu
*hugs* thanks!!
@The perfect lady
thankyou :D keep dropping by :D
@Ms. R.
naah, I wont lose this one. She/he is special, and we've already been through the frandshaapz test.. ;)
Nice! I like the tender feel in this piece. Keep it up!
@ Brosreview
:D thanks! :D
Love is very irreplaceable .. and you spoke to it very well. I also like Beyonce song with the same title ...
:) thanks Amias. and i loove that song :D :P
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